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Innocent Nightmare: Page 4

Published: Jan 11, 2011

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Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: Here
Page 5: [link]

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I think my toning is going downhill now. _{I've been also wanting to do a cover for this project but can't decide what to do.}

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Story&Delphie - *KINI-kan
Stretto - *Raielono

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AlexiMcLachlan

Jan 29, 2011

Ooh, the art in this one is really nice. I think you should work on not using so many extreme closeups. The second panel is great, but the first one is really hard to figure out because it's so closeup. Is he grabbing her arm? Then maybe use the third panel to zoom out completely and show a better view of him doing what I'm assuming is throwing her? With that, you could also use it as a chance to reestablish the setting they're in.

Geez, I feel like I'm just criticizing. XD I like this though. One more page! <3