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This has been named the crappy page. Whatever I did with this page was horrid.
If you can't tell what's happening. Delphie is passing Stretto and she goes to the door and she tries to open the door but for some strange reason the door is lock and the lock that was there somehow disappeared. ;-;
SFX is difficult.
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Story&Delphie: *KINI-kan
Stretto: *Raielono
Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: Here
Page 4: [link]
Page 5: [link]
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This has been named the crappy page. Whatever I did with this page was horrid.
If you can't tell what's happening. Delphie is passing Stretto and she goes to the door and she tries to open the door but for some strange reason the door is lock and the lock that was there somehow disappeared. ;-;
SFX is difficult.
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Story&Delphie: *KINI-kan
Stretto: *Raielono
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Heh, your artist's comment. This page IS a little sloppy. I would suggest taking the dot toning off of the first panel, maybe use slanted lines instead. Maybe if you rethought some of the scenes and shuffled the paneling around, like instead of focusing on her hand and the doorhandle, maybe do a fully body of her in front of the door?
Anyway, those are just some suggestions. You don't have to listen to me, I'm just...rambling. =/
Also, this almost seems like a setup for some GUN GET RAEPED. But I know it's not, so....it's not, right?
Anyway, those are just some suggestions. You don't have to listen to me, I'm just...rambling. =/
Also, this almost seems like a setup for some GUN GET RAEPED. But I know it's not, so....it's not, right?